Crystal Shadow

Thank you, I will. Now I just need to read a few more stories and become a Junior Writer so i can submit my first story/ novel thing. Wish me ...

My cousin would love this story, I think. I need to get her on this site. Well, I really can't find any flaws. That's a first.

Ummmm... I think I'm having trouble understanding. It's a well written piece that seems to be composed of three different stories that have no known connection so far. I get ...

I like it. You reffered to dragons a couple times, so I'm guessing this will have them included later? Besides the lack of vocabulary I'd say it's one of the ...

Ok, sounds good. This story has potential. Please stick to the balance of good and evil thing becuase, though the balance isn't perfect, it is important. Don't listen to the ...

Lots of mistakes. I want to know what this has to do with Archangels (which is one word, not two). To tell you the truth, there are only five Archangels ...

The Speakers of the Forum's giving you a hard time? Don't worry about it, it is your story after all. Though it does need corrections it's pretty good. What it ...

I like the beginning, but I would like to point out two things: 1) If they aren't men then why are they continuely called men? 2) Last time I checked, ...

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Hi everyone, I guess. I just got a chance to look around and now I know I'm going to love it here. My name is Crystal Shadow and I'm here ...